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"Go Lucario, use aura sphere!" My Lucario attacked, hitting my rival Gary's Alakazam square in the chest.  "Ha-ha, fighting-types won't hurt my alakazam!" he said, "Go alakazam! Use confusion!"
There was a flash of bright, piercing light, and when I regained my vision Lucario was staggering around in evident confusion.
Crap, I thought, I might as well try to attack, though. I brought out my secret weapon. "Go Lucario, shadow ball!"
Instead, Lucario turned and used shadow ball on me. It hit me in the stomach, throwing me back a good fifteen feet and whacking me into a tree. There was a burning pain in by wrist and ankle, and I somehow knew I had sprained them both. I thought it was over but Lucario kept advancing.
" Gary! Stop your Alakazam, this is getting out of hand!" I screamed.
"I can't, Alakazam has stopped, but your dumbass Lucario's confusion hasn't!!!" He tried to reply snarkily, but he sounded more afraid than me.
Lucario had walked straight up to me by then. He then, surprisingly, grabbed my shoulders and roughly pulled me onto my feet. At fist I thought he had snapped out of his confusion, but when he wouldn't let go of my shoulders and lifted me up into the air, I knew something was wrong. He then opened his mouth and I realized what was happening. I began to struggle, but damn Lucario was strong. But I guess that's what comes from being swallowed by a level 1oo Fighting-Steel type. I could see his mouth coming closer and closer. Then Lucario finally lowered me, struggling, into his wet mouth. "NO! LUCAR- MFFFF!!" I shouted. His slimy tongue licked me everywhere, making me easier to swallow. He literally licked me everywhere, even some parts I won't mention. I could feel myself slipping down his throat, so I struggled harder. But his throat muscles and tongue were winning. I finally felt the last of my strength leave me, and I slipped into the warm, squishy and wet chamber that was Lucario's stomach.
"LUCARIO! Snap out of it, you just ate your own trainer!"
What?!  Lucario spoke in my mind. I didn't...did I?!
"Yes, you did, you were confused and y-you hit m-me with shadow ball and… swallowed m-me…" I stammered, still shaken up from being eaten by my best friend.
Oh my god… I-I'm so sorry…
"It's… it's OK, at lest you're not digesting me...That would be horrible!"
Yeah, at least… He spoke sadly. I'll let you out now-
I spoke awkwardly, not completely understanding of my sudden urge, "Well... it is kind of comfortable in here, and I'm kind of worn out from… you know, so, um… could I stay in here for a while?"
Um... sure. I'm not gonna pretend you don't taste absolutely delicious, because you did-
"Hey!" I yelped indignantly. I wasn't completely ready to comprehend my partner devouring me-And enjoying it.
Sorry. H didn't sound very apologetic.
"OK, I think I'm gonna sleep now, Lucario, good-night…Oh, and try not to digest me while I sleep…okay?" I said uneasily.
I promise I won't...Good Night, have good nightmares about today…
"Oh, ha-ha…"
Seriously, though, good night.








The end!

Hope you enjoyed!
EDIT-

A miraculously popular vote story written by me a long time ago…Enjoy…I guess :)
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monstar211 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  New member
A little short but very good
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Jimworld70 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artist
Lucario.... 3 Feet Tall. Average 10/12 Year old... 4.5 Feet tall... How the Lucario ate a 10/12 year old baffles the hell out of me but MEH.
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TheDreamingHawk Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was a good short and sweet story!
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Firefox626 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Thx
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TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Writer
it was too short. it was good though.
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Firefox626 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Haha yeah I guess. This was written a long time ago, mind
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TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
ok. I was complaining because everything happened too fast.
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:iconfirefox626:
Firefox626 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Yeah, I get that.
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TheCrimsonCrafter Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
it was good for it's length though.
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8thDimention Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww <3
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